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Thunder Moomba
Junior Member
since 1999-10-30
Posts 21
Baldwin Park, CA, USA

0 posted 1999-11-08 11:40 PM


I love you, I hate you
I just can't decide.

I hate you, I love you
Your running threw my mind.

I hate you, I hate you
You screwed up my life.

I love you, I love you
You make me feel nice.

I hate you, I hate you
You broke my heart.

I love you, I love you
I hold you very dear.

I love you, I hate you
But it's alright
I can forgive you,
But get out of my life.



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Jr. Rodrigo M. Daz_

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Lynn
Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.
1 posted 1999-11-08 11:44 PM


I like this a lot. Those "mixed" feelings can sometimes get you.
Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-11-09 01:31 PM


Nicely done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
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3 posted 2004-04-18 09:49 PM


it's always the way, isn't it?
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