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Twice the more

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 11-08-1999 10:29 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Twice the more

I have her twice within my heart,
The younger and grown-up part.
One fascinates my eyes today
The other dreamy yesterday.

Her innocent warmed me through,
The childish trust that I knew.
Even todays superintend,
God, I love them both, no end.

She is to me a real compound,
The inner and the outward bound.
The two of her, are one shell.
The two of her, ring one bell.

The tongue that struck the first adore
And the back swing, to evermore.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 11-08-1999 10:42 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Enjoying your reminescing...thanks for sharing...
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2 posted 11-08-1999 10:46 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

What a lovely way to explain how all we parents feel about our children, of then and now! I've never heard it expressed so well!


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3 posted 11-08-1999 10:49 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Pulls at my heartstrings.
Sentimentally done.

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4 posted 11-08-1999 11:02 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I don't know, Denise. I thought it was about his wife. How about it, Sy?
Denise
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5 posted 11-08-1999 11:09 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

...ooops, guess my mind dwells on my kids too much ?!!

Very lovely poem, Seymour, capturing the person of the past and the person of the present and appreciating them both for what they were and are to you! AND MANY HAPPY FUTURES TO YOU BOTH!!!!

(thanks, Balladeer!)

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6 posted 11-09-1999 01:04 AM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

"I have her twice within my heart"

**sigh**, and to think I might have settled for just once! What a tender sentiment, Seymour!

--Kess

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Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 11-09-1999 09:22 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Once again,
To all of my good friends and more,
I must move on to form four.
Thank you all and will see you there.
Martie
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beautiful Seymour and touching
Watcher666
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9 posted 11-09-1999 01:54 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Lovely..liked this much!

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To be loved like that....sigh...
 
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