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October 30,1999

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Mike Pickering
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0 posted 11-08-1999 09:08 PM       View Profile for Mike Pickering   Email Mike Pickering   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike Pickering

I need help if this one.October 30 1999,
A day when it felt like you were mine,
I had nothing to fear,
When I held you near,

It felt like just you and me,
For the dance that seemed to last an eternity,
I put my hands on your hips,
Oh how bad I want to touch your lips,

But something prevented me,
From obtaining my destiny,
No ones to blame but myself,
I have to put my feelings on the shelf,

For another day,
When I could say,
The words I fear,
But hold so dear,

I would look into your eyes,
My stomach full of butterflies,
My heart would be racing,
From the thought of us embracing,

“Will you be mine?”
But what if you decline,
My heart would be broken,
It’s too late now the words have been spoken


© Copyright 1999 Mike Pickering - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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1 posted 11-09-1999 01:59 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

liked this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Munda
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2 posted 11-09-1999 03:14 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

And is your heart broken ? Well done : )
 
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