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Open Poetry #3

If You Don't Got It....

Ohme
Senior Member

since 1999-07-17

Posts 816
Texas

0 posted 1999-11-08 08:29 PM

If You Don't Got It

If you got it flaunt it!
That's the way some people live.
They buy themselves expensive cars
and oh, the gifts they give.
They have exclusive houses
and they also have a maid.
The way they spend their money
makes me wonder what they're paid.
That's not the way I want to live.
It's not the life for me.
Would someone tell me how to stop
flaunting my poverty?

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-11-08 08:40 PM

This is great, Ohme! I absolutely loved the ending! Very clever!

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Denise

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

2 posted 1999-11-08 08:42 PM

I'm not sure how not to flaunt it, ohme, if you figure it out, let me know. Great poem.

Michael

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-11-09 01:59 PM

Enjoyed this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-04-18 09:46 PM

this is cooL!

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