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If You Don't Got It....

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Ohme
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0 posted 11-08-1999 08:29 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Ohme

If You Don't Got It


If you got it flaunt it!
That's the way some people live.
They buy themselves expensive cars
and oh, the gifts they give.
They have exclusive houses
and they also have a maid.
The way they spend their money
makes me wonder what they're paid.
That's not the way I want to live.
It's not the life for me.
Would someone tell me how to stop
flaunting my poverty?
© Copyright 1999 Lorene Meadows - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 11-08-1999 08:40 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is great, Ohme! I absolutely loved the ending! Very clever!

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Michael
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2 posted 11-08-1999 08:42 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

I'm not sure how not to flaunt it, ohme, if you figure it out, let me know. Great poem.

Michael
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Enjoyed this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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this is cooL!
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