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So Deeply

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vandana
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0 posted 11-08-1999 07:09 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana

When you love someone deeply,
Then theuy became yours,
When you feel so deep,
To watch them grow slowly,
You feel slowly in love,
You want to touch their hand,
But you're afaird to ask,
How they feel for you,
I watch you grow,
Every day,
I open my arms for you,
I comfort you as you grow,
You become my life,
I open my hand,
And watch you grow,
As the days go by,
Iknow that,
When beauty grows,
It lies in your heart,
But not in minds,
You gave me love,
You gave me courage,
And when I want to love you,
I love you,
More and more,
I learn so much from you,
I learnt that
When the beauty shows into light,
It really shows
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Mike
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1 posted 11-08-1999 09:33 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

enjoyed your poem. I haven't ever seen any other members from India.. welcome.
RobertB
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since 09-26-1999
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2 posted 11-08-1999 09:38 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

love is like watching a flower open up isn't it??

Robert

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
Watcher666
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3 posted 11-09-1999 02:02 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Loved the imagery.Nicely done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Munda
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4 posted 11-09-1999 03:01 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

lovely indeed. : )
Jennifer Marie O'Neil
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5 posted 11-09-1999 04:05 PM       View Profile for Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Email Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jennifer Marie O'Neil

so beautiful !

There are two ways of spreadng light: To be the candle or the mirror that reflects it. EDITH WARTON

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