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first attempt at a sonnet

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Jennifer Marie O'Neil
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0 posted 11-08-1999 03:05 PM       View Profile for Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Email Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jennifer Marie O'Neil


I wait to hear the ringing of the bells
To know our fit together is just fine
Oh to again be under your sweet spells
And you to hear the love I have devine
While we would lay until the rising sun
The sign of day which we could not ignore
For only in darkness we had almost won
And day light leaves me longing for much more
Your eyes are orbs of passion and such fire
And they are where I long some day to be
For they reflect my heart and my desire
A sight I fear that I will never see
But I will wait to hear the bells again
To see once more what I saw in you then

[This message has been edited by Jennifer Marie O'Neil (edited 11-08-1999).]
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Munda
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1 posted 11-08-1999 07:47 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

I liked this much. : )
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2 posted 11-08-1999 08:38 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Jennifer! I wish I could write sonnets, just can't seem to get that extra foot going there! I like this very much!

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Jennifer Marie O'Neil
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3 posted 11-09-1999 01:46 AM       View Profile for Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Email Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jennifer Marie O'Neil

this was intended for nans workshop but i do not have the password yet to post there - so criticism on my da- dums and stuff is welcome

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Faith is to believe what we do not see, and the reward of faith is to see what we believe. AUGUSTINE
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4 posted 11-09-1999 01:36 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Enjoyed this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Jennifer Marie O'Neil
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5 posted 11-09-1999 03:59 PM       View Profile for Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Email Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jennifer Marie O'Neil

i was affraid it sounded too simple -
but it there was a lot of feeling behind
my words - thanks for reading

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Faith is to believe what we do not see, and the reward of faith is to see what we believe. AUGUSTINE
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