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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-11-08 02:31 PM


i fell to the floor
always crawling to the door
to let you in..
take something
..everything from me again
wanting and needing
dying and bleeding all the same..
a little bit of longing does this too me..
but it all could be ivisible
if only
you love
what you can never see...



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Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-11-08 02:51 PM


Nicely done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Pepper
Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
2 posted 1999-11-08 02:56 PM


Enjoyed the read Jackal....

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


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