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Iloveit
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0 posted 11-08-1999 12:06 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Iloveit

the present

and it all started with a kiss and the buttons of her dress,
that his fingers brushed and then couldn't leave...
well, no, I can't say that
for it started long ago...

a word seen on a screen
pulled her to him, or was it him to her?
a simple post and a laugh and he was gone.
just a few keyboard clicks,
it could be said,
but it was oh so much more.

his name alone made
her lips curl in delight
her mind filled with wonder
at the man behind the name,
each day bringing only more
more of him and more of wanting.

she opened her soul, herself and her all
to him, a friend, and only a friend
she swore
against all the hurts from before.
but finding acceptance from the inside out
and with faltering steps closer to love
she tripped
and found a heart like none before.

with his keyboard touches
he touched her here
he touched her there
caressed her like no other
his words sliding into around and in between
resist him she could not.

a day, one day, they did steal
a gift of each other, this present they did entrust.
his lips met hers
with a passion long denied.
his words now, he made come true
he was no writer of lies.

fingers entwine for a moment only
then travel every inch
lips tenderly explore,
only clothing now restricts
and her buttons he does softly touch,
a question in his eyes.
permission not needed
they both knew the answer,
but asked because of the man he is.
a silent blink yes
ribbons untied, wrapping removed
and cast to the floor

two bodies mesh...two souls meld


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1999 Iloveit



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Watcher666
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1 posted 11-08-1999 12:24 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Beautiful!

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2 posted 11-08-1999 01:10 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Lovely, Lovey.... glad you finally posted it!
RainbowGirl
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3 posted 11-08-1999 01:45 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Iloveit: *sigh*...Eloquent!

HUSG

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Iloveit
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4 posted 11-08-1999 02:01 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

watcher thanks

suthern, yep, finally got the nerve or to be more exact, remembered where I saved it lolol thanks

rainbow girl *sigh* on this side too, thank you
Toerag
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5 posted 11-08-1999 02:16 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

And as the hair upon her chest,
brushed against his own,
Soon their souls and bodies meshed,
Toerag had that granny all alone!!!

Nice poem dear, well done!!!
Iloveit
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6 posted 11-08-1999 02:20 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

absolutely ROFG@And as the hair upon her chest, brushed against his own,

thanks toe for the compliment and the smile
Pepper
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7 posted 11-08-1999 03:20 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Yes tis' very lovely indeed Iloveit....


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DreadedOne
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8 posted 11-08-1999 07:39 PM       View Profile for DreadedOne   Email DreadedOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DreadedOne

I liked this one alot. Beautiful

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Dreams are reachible, love completing.


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9 posted 11-08-1999 07:49 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Pushes my buttons !
Nicely done.

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Pepper, Dreadead one, Marge thanks glad you liked it
Martie
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11 posted 11-09-1999 12:10 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

So beautiful and sensual
Iloveit
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12 posted 11-09-1999 05:45 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

thanks martie sensual is fantasy for me lately lol, but glad I achieved it in this poem
JTF
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13 posted 11-10-1999 05:17 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

ribbons untied, wrapping removed and cast to the floor ... so vivid ... a passionate poem Lovey ... well done ..

I wish you'll steal that day
Iloveit
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14 posted 11-10-1999 11:28 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

me too, me too....thanks jtf
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neat piece!
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