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Ayla
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 50


0 posted 1999-11-08 09:57 AM


You looked different
when you walked in today.
I realized what it was
when you looked in my way.
I saw the sadness
and pain in your eyes.
How I wished I could tell you
that everything's gonna be fine.
But then she came
over and talked to you.
I saw you smile
and my heart went still.
For it hurts not to be
the one by your side.
To know that I'll never
be the one that you like.
I know that
you're feeling sad.
I feel it too
and it hurts so bad.
She's not the reason
why I feel like that.
It's because I know
that you're feeling sad.

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Loving someone is never easy.Especially when your love is a secret...

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Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-11-08 10:20 AM


Nicely done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2004-04-18 09:57 PM


how I know this is true!
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