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broker6
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0 posted 1999-11-08 09:29 AM


Evening Song
by *Richard J. Budig 1995

Evening's soft melody
Settles around me,
Sending my thoughts
In search of you.
Where are you now,
I wonder, and as I reach,
I find your hand
Seeking mine,
And as night takes
The evening,
I bid your heart
To come into mine.


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Watcher666
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1 posted 1999-11-08 10:57 AM


Nicely done.

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Denise
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2 posted 1999-11-08 09:27 PM


A lovely evening song!

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RobertB
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3 posted 1999-11-08 09:30 PM


wow Richard..I am enjoying you. You free verse guy you!

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JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
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4 posted 1999-11-10 02:59 PM


This free verse is very nice. I'll look for more of your poems.
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5 posted 2001-12-11 04:39 AM


A simple request passiontely written. I love this!  

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