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Open Poetry #3

You And Me

DreadedOne
Member

since 1999-10-25

Posts 51
Odessa, TX

0 posted 1999-11-08 04:19 AM

YOU AND ME

Before the dawn of life so dear,
Before the sun broke clouds to tear.
Before the sun 'round the earth rolled,
Before the night brought on the cold.
Before the birds looked to the sky,
Before a mind could wonder why.
Before the blind came to see,
Before all, was you and me.

But down the line many storms set in,
As the winding road begins to thin.
Will the promises we have made,
Stand tomorrow or simply fade?
During all the good times and the bad.
During all the times a heart grows sad.
When multitudes have died you'll see,
During it all will stand you and me.

Come the dusk over Lifetime's pass,
Winter snow covers gold autumn grass.
The blanket of darkness finding its way,
Throughout the sky, swallows the day.
After we've given all we have to give,
After we've lived out all we're gonna live.
After all that will has come to be,
After all will still be you and me.

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D.O.

Fear is overcomable, life is fleeting.
Dreams are reachible, love completing.

Patrick B
Member

since 1999-10-28

Posts 58
uk

1 posted 1999-11-08 07:24 AM

you paint the picture well

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-11-08 10:46 AM

Nice imagery!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

3 posted 1999-11-08 08:15 PM

Very well written, D.O. I love the imagery.
Beautifully done.

Michael

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-04-25 07:55 PM

good write

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