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You And Me

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DreadedOne
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0 posted 11-08-1999 04:19 AM       View Profile for DreadedOne   Email DreadedOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DreadedOne

YOU AND ME


Before the dawn of life so dear,
Before the sun broke clouds to tear.
Before the sun 'round the earth rolled,
Before the night brought on the cold.
Before the birds looked to the sky,
Before a mind could wonder why.
Before the blind came to see,
Before all, was you and me.

But down the line many storms set in,
As the winding road begins to thin.
Will the promises we have made,
Stand tomorrow or simply fade?
During all the good times and the bad.
During all the times a heart grows sad.
When multitudes have died you'll see,
During it all will stand you and me.

Come the dusk over Lifetime's pass,
Winter snow covers gold autumn grass.
The blanket of darkness finding its way,
Throughout the sky, swallows the day.
After we've given all we have to give,
After we've lived out all we're gonna live.
After all that will has come to be,
After all will still be you and me.

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D.O.

Fear is overcomable, life is fleeting.
Dreams are reachible, love completing.


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Patrick B
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1 posted 11-08-1999 07:24 AM       View Profile for Patrick B   Email Patrick B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Patrick B

you paint the picture well
Watcher666
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Nice imagery!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Michael
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3 posted 11-08-1999 08:15 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Very well written, D.O. I love the imagery.
Beautifully done.

Michael
passing shadows
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good write
 
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