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DreamEvil
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0 posted 1999-11-08 04:06 AM


One voice answers my need for compassion.
One touch soothes away my indecision.
One kiss is life to a soul so ashen.
One love pulls the blinders from my vision.

One touch soothes away my indecision.
One woman saw through to my inner worth.
One love pulls the blinders from my vision.
One romance has led to my faith's rebirth.

One woman saw through to my inner worth.
One embrace from her is worth all my pain.
One romance has led to my faith's rebirth.
One lesson teaches hope is not in vain.

One embrace from her is worth all my pain.
One verse from me shows no little honor.
One lesson teaches hope is not in vain.
One noble life does her no dishonor.

One verse from me shows no little honor.
One passion becomes the height of pleasure.
One noble life does her no dishonor.
One sight of her is the greatest treasure.

One passion becomes the height of pleasure.
One kiss is life to a soul so ashen.
One sight of her is the greatest treasure.
One voice answers my need for compassion.


©1999 DreamEvil

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©



[This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 11-08-1999).]

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Jennifer Marie O'Neil
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1 posted 1999-11-08 04:14 AM


One beautiful poem !

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Faith is to believe what we do not see, and the reward of faith is to see what we believe. AUGUSTINE

Christopher
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2 posted 1999-11-08 04:16 AM


Awesome, brother. I see your heart vividly!
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3 posted 1999-11-08 07:44 AM


Beautiful,Brother of my heart!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Toerag
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4 posted 1999-11-08 07:50 AM


One fine job here DE....you're one fine poet.....ya know it?....I rarely reply to your stuff for some stupid reason...cuz most of it's damn good?....But I really liked the thought behind this one!!!
suthern
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5 posted 1999-11-08 09:25 AM


If it's the right one, one is enough... great tribute, DE!
DreadedOne
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6 posted 1999-11-08 07:22 PM


Great pantoum, I really liked this.

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D.O.

Fear is overcomable, life is fleeting.
Dreams are reachible, love completing.



Iloveit
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7 posted 1999-11-08 07:24 PM


liked this one a lot too, really well done
caroline
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8 posted 1999-11-08 07:32 PM


Lovely

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats


Munda
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9 posted 1999-11-08 07:35 PM


This is indeed a great pantoum !
Poet deVine
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10 posted 1999-11-08 07:47 PM


One more kudo? Yes, afraid so! Good job.
Michael
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11 posted 1999-11-08 08:19 PM


Nice job, Dream...your emotion is shining again...kudos, indeed.

Michael

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12 posted 1999-11-08 08:48 PM


Ohhhh, 'Johnny One Note' ... you're singing my song. Very nice.


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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Ohme
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13 posted 1999-11-08 09:45 PM



Lovely, DreamEvil.

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 1999-11-08 09:49 PM


DE,
Enjoyed the read.

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