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DreamEvil
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0 posted 11-08-1999 04:06 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

One voice answers my need for compassion.
One touch soothes away my indecision.
One kiss is life to a soul so ashen.
One love pulls the blinders from my vision.

One touch soothes away my indecision.
One woman saw through to my inner worth.
One love pulls the blinders from my vision.
One romance has led to my faith's rebirth.

One woman saw through to my inner worth.
One embrace from her is worth all my pain.
One romance has led to my faith's rebirth.
One lesson teaches hope is not in vain.

One embrace from her is worth all my pain.
One verse from me shows no little honor.
One lesson teaches hope is not in vain.
One noble life does her no dishonor.

One verse from me shows no little honor.
One passion becomes the height of pleasure.
One noble life does her no dishonor.
One sight of her is the greatest treasure.

One passion becomes the height of pleasure.
One kiss is life to a soul so ashen.
One sight of her is the greatest treasure.
One voice answers my need for compassion.


©1999 DreamEvil

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©



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Jennifer Marie O'Neil
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1 posted 11-08-1999 04:14 AM       View Profile for Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Email Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jennifer Marie O'Neil

One beautiful poem !

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Faith is to believe what we do not see, and the reward of faith is to see what we believe. AUGUSTINE
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


2 posted 11-08-1999 04:16 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Awesome, brother. I see your heart vividly!
Watcher666
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3 posted 11-08-1999 07:44 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Beautiful,Brother of my heart!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Toerag
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4 posted 11-08-1999 07:50 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

One fine job here DE....you're one fine poet.....ya know it?....I rarely reply to your stuff for some stupid reason...cuz most of it's damn good?....But I really liked the thought behind this one!!!
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5 posted 11-08-1999 09:25 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

If it's the right one, one is enough... great tribute, DE!
DreadedOne
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6 posted 11-08-1999 07:22 PM       View Profile for DreadedOne   Email DreadedOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DreadedOne

Great pantoum, I really liked this.

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D.O.

Fear is overcomable, life is fleeting.
Dreams are reachible, love completing.


Iloveit
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7 posted 11-08-1999 07:24 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

liked this one a lot too, really well done
caroline
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8 posted 11-08-1999 07:32 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Lovely

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

Munda
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9 posted 11-08-1999 07:35 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

This is indeed a great pantoum !
Poet deVine
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10 posted 11-08-1999 07:47 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

One more kudo? Yes, afraid so! Good job.
Michael
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11 posted 11-08-1999 08:19 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Nice job, Dream...your emotion is shining again...kudos, indeed.

Michael
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12 posted 11-08-1999 08:48 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Ohhhh, 'Johnny One Note' ... you're singing my song. Very nice.


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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Ohme
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Lovely, DreamEvil.
Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 11-08-1999 09:49 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

DE,
Enjoyed the read.
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