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Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


0 posted 11-08-1999 03:39 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Christopher

I happened to stumble across an old aquaintance today, (which was quite nice ) and she had some of my poetry from High School Daze.
This is a piece of my (limited) mind from '90!


Future



Love, Hate, Joy, Fear
A secret, a death, one tear
The depths of darkness
The passion of a lover's kiss
Look at the Earth, the way it heals
And the pain, because of us it feels
Listen to your heart's sad desire
Hear the sound of your mind on fire
Taste the mirth of the laughing moon
Savor the dread of impending doom
Speak the names of those who will
Scream the sounds that others kill
Touch the hearts of future to come
Caress their souls or they will have none
Smell the scent of a lifetime lost
Inhale the smell of the bloody cost
Do something to stop the pain to be
Do something, do something to make them see.


[This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 11-08-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 C.G. Ward - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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1 posted 11-08-1999 04:08 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Interesting progression of talent I see. The message is excellent as well.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvilŠ

Patrick B
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2 posted 11-08-1999 07:27 AM       View Profile for Patrick B   Email Patrick B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Patrick B

I liked it,it flowed nicely
Toerag
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Ala bam a


3 posted 11-08-1999 07:35 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Ah yes....meeting old pals is nice....as was your poem.....Now if I could just find some of the poetry I'd written from school? Problem is, most of it was confiscated by the teachers and I usually ended up in detention for them.
Watcher666
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4 posted 11-08-1999 07:42 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Excellent piece Wolf Pup...liked this very much!
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley


5 posted 11-08-1999 09:15 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I like this very much. You were a wise young man - as you are today!
Michael
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6 posted 11-08-1999 08:55 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

So I guess you've always been this way? hehe...you know I'm joking. I see pain the "pain" readily evident in your early works as I do mine...it's always been there. I also see your depth of perception came early on in life, too, that I would not have expected in a high school piece. Good job, Chris.


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