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Future (From days gone by) |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration 
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I happened to stumble across an old aquaintance today, (which was quite nice  ) and she had some of my poetry from High School Daze.This is a piece of my (limited) mind from '90! Love, Hate, Joy, Fear A secret, a death, one tear The depths of darkness The passion of a lover's kiss Look at the Earth, the way it heals And the pain, because of us it feels Listen to your heart's sad desire Hear the sound of your mind on fire Taste the mirth of the laughing moon Savor the dread of impending doom Speak the names of those who will Scream the sounds that others kill Touch the hearts of future to come Caress their souls or they will have none Smell the scent of a lifetime lost Inhale the smell of the bloody cost Do something to stop the pain to be Do something, do something to make them see. [This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 11-08-1999).] |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Interesting progression of talent I see. The message is excellent as well. ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Patrick B Member
since 1999-10-28
Posts 58uk |
I liked it,it flowed nicely |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Ah yes....meeting old pals is nice....as was your poem.....Now if I could just find some of the poetry I'd written from school? Problem is, most of it was confiscated by the teachers and I usually ended up in detention for them. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Excellent piece Wolf Pup...liked this very much! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like this very much. You were a wise young man - as you are today!  |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
So I guess you've always been this way? hehe...you know I'm joking. I see pain the "pain" readily evident in your early works as I do mine...it's always been there. I also see your depth of perception came early on in life, too, that I would not have expected in a high school piece. Good job, Chris. Michael |
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