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Jennifer Marie O'Neil
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since 11-01-1999
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port charlotte fl/bklyn ny


0 posted 11-08-1999 03:35 AM       View Profile for Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Email Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jennifer Marie O'Neil


You could be anywhere tonight
anywhere but in my sight

You could be laughing sweet and clear, but into someone elses ear

You could be riding on the train
looking out at New York rain

You could be holding soeone's hand
and on your heart they dont demand

You could be sipping dry red wine
and without me you are just fine

You could be laying with another
but in your heart I hope I hover

Or maybe your somewhere lonley too
wondering if I am thinking of you
© Copyright 1999 Jennifer Marie O'Neil - All Rights Reserved
Patrick B
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since 10-28-1999
Posts 58
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1 posted 11-08-1999 07:23 AM       View Profile for Patrick B   Email Patrick B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Patrick B

feels familiar,I like it :-)
Nan
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2 posted 11-08-1999 07:26 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

There you are Jennifer - Yep - You have a good feel for meter - I'll be reading your posts - Show me more of yer stuff....

Toerag
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3 posted 11-08-1999 08:06 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Me too Jenny...(show me some more of your "stuff"...LOL)...this had some good thought behind it too...welcome and keep your mind working....
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on the threshold of a dream


4 posted 11-08-1999 09:23 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Welcome, Jennifer... I enjoyed this!
Pepper
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5 posted 11-08-1999 10:55 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

I can relate. Well done,and Welcome to Passions!!

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

Watcher666
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since 10-13-1999
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6 posted 11-08-1999 10:57 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Thoughts I've pondered often.Well done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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