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Two Formed As One (Revised..with thanks to Ruth. )

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Sally S.
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0 posted 11-08-1999 12:35 AM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sally S.


I know my love for you, at last
Within my heart forever true.
In dreams you’ve always come to me,
Like calming winds of mem’ries past.
Love softly finds it’s way to you
To capture what is meant to be.

Remain in truth of what will be,
Embrace this strength and make it last.
As life engulfs its time with you,
Surrender to this love so true.
Unspoken passion from the past,
Reveal your feelings now of me.

Evoke these dreams you’ve brought to me.
Yesterday? It can not be!
Over throw thoughts of the past,
Undying love is ours at last!
For hearts tell tales of wishes true,
Oh love, my soul belongs with you.

Reach for those stars I’d give to you,
Ask naught of what you give to me.
Loosened heartstrings, yes it’s true.
Look to the future, what will be.
Envisage time, for it will last,
Tormented lovers now in past.

Erelong, there will not be this past.
Regard now what I say to you…
Negate false thoughts that this won’t last.
Intrigue the night, come follow me
To a place where we will be
Yielding never more, love true.

Melodic forces forming true,
You cast aside fears of the past,
Of silent question, “What will be?”
Now strong, I stand here right with you,
Enraptured by your stance with me.
Love formed two souls as one at last.

Ordained it’s true, both me and you…
Victors of our past. Now with me,
Each day will be, one more to last.

© Copyright 1999 Sally - All Rights Reserved
Tara Simms
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1 posted 11-08-1999 12:44 AM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Beautiful acrostic!
Balladeer
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2 posted 11-08-1999 12:50 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Without the acrostic, it is an excellent poem. With it, it is exceptional. Beautiful work, Sally.
Watcher666
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since 10-13-1999
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3 posted 11-08-1999 10:39 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Beautiful...liked this much!

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Pepper
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So very beautiful Sally......excellent writing!......

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Sally S.
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Ohio


5 posted 11-08-1999 11:23 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Thank you all..so much. I do like it better now that it was "cleaned up" a bit.
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


6 posted 11-09-1999 02:52 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Sally, this is beautiful and well written, and you did all the work

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(She flies with her own wings)
 
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