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broker6
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0 posted 11-07-1999 09:21 PM       View Profile for broker6   Email broker6   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for broker6

Your Garden
by ©R. Budig 1998


I walked in your garden today
It was full of red bunch-o-hearts
And pretty blue dream-bells
And soft green pillow-moss
I found where you laid your head
And slept the long night through
Where you dreamed dreams
Of lifeís enchanted moments
Of hearts filled with love
Of souls seeking tomorrow
And where, like morning dew,
Godís sweet grace enveloped you
© Copyright 1999 broker6 - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 11-07-1999 09:25 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is soooooo beautiful. I enjoyed reading this very much!

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X Angel
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2 posted 11-07-1999 09:45 PM       View Profile for X Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for X Angel

WOW I almost didn't open this poem, what bad luck for me if I hadn't. This was neat, it kind of had a feel of the old greats
Keep up the great work.
X

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"We have loved the stars too fondly to be fearful of the night" (Tombstone epitaph of two amateur astronomers)
Watcher666
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3 posted 11-08-1999 11:26 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Lovely....liked this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Pepper
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4 posted 11-08-1999 04:53 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Enchanting......a wonderful piece...

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

caroline
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5 posted 11-08-1999 07:39 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

I have to agree with XAngel...it does remind one of the "old greats"! You have a good style. Nicely done!

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

 
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