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To make a dream

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 11-07-1999 07:38 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

To make a dream

For you to make a phantom dream,
Add within its sum, some scheme.
Then put a pinch of true and seem
And savor it, your sleep to steam.

Take it out within the hour,
Garnish it, with plenty of flower.
Serve it in your ivory tower.
There release its awesome power.

Now your dream can be good or bad,
Depending on your seasons add.
You may have summoned Galahad,
Or the magic lamp of Sinbad.

To make the recipe succeed,
You must think carefully, indeed.
Its true you add to suit your need,
Just do not add that pinch of greed.

For if you do it may explode and
Hit the fan like pie a la mode.

© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
X Angel
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1 posted 11-07-1999 08:23 PM       View Profile for X Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for X Angel

Hehehe this was great!
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Denise
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2 posted 11-07-1999 08:27 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Ditto! This is great, Seymour!

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Seymour Tabin
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X Angel and Denise,
Well I got two greats with one explode. Not bad and thanks for the read.
Watcher666
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4 posted 11-08-1999 11:29 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Excellent...loved this!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Martie
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5 posted 11-08-1999 03:01 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

I enjoy everything you write Seymour. The poet is you.
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 11-08-1999 09:59 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Watcher,
Thank you for the kind words, I can hardly keep up with all the postings lately.
Martie,
Thank you for the wonderful comments, you are no slouch yourself, love your stuff.
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7 posted 11-08-1999 10:07 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

A dream is a 'pie a'la mode'
your heart makes? Yummy !

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8 posted 11-08-1999 10:22 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

I'm laughing...
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 11-09-1999 09:31 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Marge,
Don,t like loose ends want to thank you before I move on to forum four.
Sunshine,
Anything that makes you laugh makes me happy.
 
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