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JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
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0 posted 1999-11-07 06:11 PM


I seem to be looking
For something
But what?
I do not know
My eyes are glazed over
So it is as if I can't see at all
What am I looking for?
I seem to be looking for perfection in me
And everyone else I come in contact with
Perfection is so hard
An unacheivable thing
So why am I looking?
Striving so?
For something that my glazed over eyes cannnot even find
The reason is simply, maybe...
I'm trying too hard?

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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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1 posted 1999-11-07 06:15 PM


Nice poem, Joy. Welcome to Passions. I don't believe anyone ever reaches perfection, striving so hard for it can certainly lead to frustration!

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X Angel
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since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521
Oregon
2 posted 1999-11-07 08:32 PM


Hehehe I can relate! I am of the mind that it'll get done right if I do it myself *pout* LOL anyways, I like your poetyr, it has a wry twist to it
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Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-11-08 11:21 AM


Nicely done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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