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JOY 14
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0 posted 11-07-1999 06:11 PM       View Profile for JOY 14   Email JOY 14   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit JOY 14's Home Page   View IP for JOY 14

I seem to be looking
For something
But what?
I do not know
My eyes are glazed over
So it is as if I can't see at all
What am I looking for?
I seem to be looking for perfection in me
And everyone else I come in contact with
Perfection is so hard
An unacheivable thing
So why am I looking?
Striving so?
For something that my glazed over eyes cannnot even find
The reason is simply, maybe...
I'm trying too hard?
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1 posted 11-07-1999 06:15 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Nice poem, Joy. Welcome to Passions. I don't believe anyone ever reaches perfection, striving so hard for it can certainly lead to frustration!

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Hehehe I can relate! I am of the mind that it'll get done right if I do it myself *pout* LOL anyways, I like your poetyr, it has a wry twist to it
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3 posted 11-08-1999 11:21 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Nicely done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
 
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