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Creep!(Echo...please read)

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Lynn
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since 09-20-1999
Posts 321
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.


0 posted 11-07-1999 05:52 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lynn

This is a poem that a friend
and I wrote together. If
anyone read a poem I posted
titled "Melancholy", my
friend wrote that, and he's
the one who wrote this with
me.


CREEP

Nights shadows are cast
down upon you,
And no one seems to care.
No one seems to miss you.

The sun has now set
on your soul.
You're no longer the person
you used to be.

Your time for happiness
has passed you.
Dreadfulness is now
all you have left.

Insanity is all that
your mind knows.
But there's no walls
to hold you back.

You've stalked your prey,
now escape with it.
Steal all of its dreams,
aspirations, and hopes.

Leave it with harsh memories
of young innocent lies.
Take every bit of pureness
it has left, and run.

Get away fast, and leave
no evidence of your existence
Let no clue be discovered
in the search for your guilt.

Hide from all emotions,
don't let them take you over.
Don't let them weaken you,
for your pride would be lost.

Your need for strength
is more than desired.
It's the only way you will
be able to make it through.

There's too much guilt
involved,
and too many consequences.
No one will show pity,
for you will be the creep.
© Copyright 1999 Jennifer Lynn Bonham - All Rights Reserved
X Angel
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since 11-07-1999
Posts 1592
Oregon


1 posted 11-07-1999 08:19 PM       View Profile for X Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for X Angel

Geez I'd hate to be this guy
X
Watcher666
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since 10-13-1999
Posts 1630


2 posted 11-08-1999 11:17 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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