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Aurora's Fire
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since 1999-11-07
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Oshawa, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 1999-11-07 05:31 PM


When he came to me and said he loved me
I thought to myself it could not be.
Can you believe a person who leaves for 14 years,
can you trust someone who doesn't really know you?
Everyone told me to give him a chance,
but my heart it told me to freeze,
turn around
and never look back.
I was a wreck a part of me wanted to believe,
but that part was not rational,
it was hope,
not knowledge.
I said let him make the effort,
if he still persists,
and tries to be with me,
then I will give him a piece of my heart.
5 months later
and I am still waiting for the phone to ring
The way I see it is that he donated a little sperm,
made me for my mom,
and well end of story.

© Copyright 1999 Aurora's Fire - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 1999-11-07 05:55 PM


Oh this is so sad. It must be rough to be in that situation. Very nicely written. Welcome to Passions.

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Denise


Marge Tindal
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2 posted 1999-11-07 08:20 PM


Aurora's Fire ... what a beautiful name.
I can sure feel your pain in this. But, know what? Your mom sure is one lucky lady !
And welcome to our world !

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Aurora's Fire
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since 1999-11-07
Posts 28
Oshawa, Ontario, Canada
3 posted 1999-11-07 09:13 PM


thanx *S* you both are very kind. Rough situation, but easy if you've got the right people behind you. thanx again.

(hoping I am allowed a return reply *fingers crossed*)

X Angel
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since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521
Oregon
4 posted 1999-11-07 09:21 PM


Well your Mom got the best end of the deal now didn't she?
Welcome
X

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"We have loved the stars too fondly to be fearful of the night" (Tombstone epitaph of two amateur astronomers)

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
5 posted 1999-11-07 09:40 PM


My heart goes out to you .....
Welcome to Passions Aurora's Fire!

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 1999-11-08 12:02 PM


So sad, but your Mom got the best present ever, you! Welcome to Passions

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

7 posted 1999-11-08 11:32 AM


So sad!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023
United Kingdom
8 posted 1999-11-08 05:41 PM


Aurora's Fire: Sweetheart, What can I say apart from HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Martie
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since 1999-09-21
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California
9 posted 1999-11-08 05:59 PM


Sometimes the sad times and bad times are the times that give us strength. Welcome!
Aurora's Fire
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since 1999-11-07
Posts 28
Oshawa, Ontario, Canada
10 posted 1999-11-08 09:08 PM


Wise words Martie. Thanx to you all, support surely helps the wounds heal fast.


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