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Aurora's Fire
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Oshawa, Ontario, Canada


0 posted 11-07-1999 05:31 PM       View Profile for Aurora's Fire   Email Aurora's Fire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aurora's Fire

When he came to me and said he loved me
I thought to myself it could not be.
Can you believe a person who leaves for 14 years,
can you trust someone who doesn't really know you?
Everyone told me to give him a chance,
but my heart it told me to freeze,
turn around
and never look back.
I was a wreck a part of me wanted to believe,
but that part was not rational,
it was hope,
not knowledge.
I said let him make the effort,
if he still persists,
and tries to be with me,
then I will give him a piece of my heart.
5 months later
and I am still waiting for the phone to ring
The way I see it is that he donated a little sperm,
made me for my mom,
and well end of story.
© Copyright 1999 Aurora's Fire - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 11-07-1999 05:55 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Oh this is so sad. It must be rough to be in that situation. Very nicely written. Welcome to Passions.

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Denise

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 11-07-1999 08:20 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Aurora's Fire ... what a beautiful name.
I can sure feel your pain in this. But, know what? Your mom sure is one lucky lady !
And welcome to our world !

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Aurora's Fire
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Oshawa, Ontario, Canada


3 posted 11-07-1999 09:13 PM       View Profile for Aurora's Fire   Email Aurora's Fire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aurora's Fire

thanx *S* you both are very kind. Rough situation, but easy if you've got the right people behind you. thanx again.

(hoping I am allowed a return reply *fingers crossed*)
X Angel
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4 posted 11-07-1999 09:21 PM       View Profile for X Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for X Angel

Well your Mom got the best end of the deal now didn't she?
Welcome
X

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"We have loved the stars too fondly to be fearful of the night" (Tombstone epitaph of two amateur astronomers)
Pepper
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5 posted 11-07-1999 09:40 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

My heart goes out to you .....
Welcome to Passions Aurora's Fire!

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

Isis
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6 posted 11-08-1999 12:02 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

So sad, but your Mom got the best present ever, you! Welcome to Passions

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Watcher666
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7 posted 11-08-1999 11:32 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

So sad!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
RainbowGirl
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8 posted 11-08-1999 05:41 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Aurora's Fire: Sweetheart, What can I say apart from HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.
Martie
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9 posted 11-08-1999 05:59 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Sometimes the sad times and bad times are the times that give us strength. Welcome!
Aurora's Fire
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10 posted 11-08-1999 09:08 PM       View Profile for Aurora's Fire   Email Aurora's Fire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aurora's Fire

Wise words Martie. Thanx to you all, support surely helps the wounds heal fast.

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