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tulip
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0 posted 1999-11-07 02:42 PM


Please Rescue me
From my eternity.

Two Paths
To which to choose from.

One full of weeds, vines, and sticker bushes.
The other, of roses.

It looked so beautiful.
Full of promise, and hope.

Which would you chose?



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Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
1 posted 1999-11-07 03:24 PM


Life is hard sometimes, isn't it. : )
Liked how you translated this feeling. : )

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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2 posted 2004-04-25 08:40 PM


good question
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