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Scene's From a Park

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LRAW
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since 11-06-1999
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0 posted 11-07-1999 02:13 PM       View Profile for LRAW   Email LRAW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LRAW

Scenes From A Park


Living out realities in between the sequences of our lives
You don't understand the madness running through my mind
Submerging me in this shallow hell of life
I focus only on the darkness of the night
While the graves of fallen men
Begin to crack with shame
Leaving only crying children there to blame

A woman in the distance
Leaves some food for the birds
She's so unsuspecting
Not even glancing around
I call her name
But she's too far to hear my words
I need to see her
So I get up off the ground
And I follow her down the path that she has walked
But she sees me and runs
Before we could even talk

Flowing downward
On the road of despair
My head spins around
But nobody cares
Life seems to be egging me on
But where does one go
If he's afraid of the sun
There's no where to go
But I cannot stay here
Where the people laugh and smile all day

A little child sits next to me
She counts the fingers on her hand
She seems so sweet and so happy
But her thoughts are nothing like a man's
She doesn't see the horror I see
And she doesn't feel the pain in me

No one cares about anything I do
This world is so different
Than the one I knew
My heart has be torn in so many pieces
I can't even begin to describe
The torture and anguish I feel inside


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Munda
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since 10-08-1999
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1 posted 11-07-1999 03:16 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Sounds like you're having a pretty hard time there. Anything I can do, other than saying welcome to Passions ?
Denise
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2 posted 11-07-1999 05:44 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

A sad piece. Very well expressed emotions in this. Welcome to Passions.

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Watcher666
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since 10-13-1999
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3 posted 11-08-1999 10:25 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

So sad.

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4 posted 04-25-2004 08:27 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

I feel that way too sometimes
 
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