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Open Poetry #3

Scene's From a Park

LRAW
Junior Member

since 1999-11-06

Posts 15

0 posted 1999-11-07 02:13 PM

Scenes From A Park

Living out realities in between the sequences of our lives
You don't understand the madness running through my mind
Submerging me in this shallow hell of life
I focus only on the darkness of the night
While the graves of fallen men
Begin to crack with shame
Leaving only crying children there to blame

A woman in the distance
Leaves some food for the birds
She's so unsuspecting
Not even glancing around
I call her name
But she's too far to hear my words
I need to see her
So I get up off the ground
And I follow her down the path that she has walked
But she sees me and runs
Before we could even talk

Flowing downward
On the road of despair
My head spins around
But nobody cares
Life seems to be egging me on
But where does one go
If he's afraid of the sun
There's no where to go
But I cannot stay here
Where the people laugh and smile all day

A little child sits next to me
She counts the fingers on her hand
She seems so sweet and so happy
But her thoughts are nothing like a man's
She doesn't see the horror I see
And she doesn't feel the pain in me

No one cares about anything I do
This world is so different
Than the one I knew
My heart has be torn in so many pieces
I can't even begin to describe
The torture and anguish I feel inside

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

1 posted 1999-11-07 03:16 PM

Sounds like you're having a pretty hard time there. Anything I can do, other than saying welcome to Passions ?

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-11-07 05:44 PM

A sad piece.

Very well expressed emotions in this. Welcome to Passions.

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Denise

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-11-08 10:25 AM

So sad.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-04-25 08:27 PM

I feel that way too sometimes

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