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Marge Tindal
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~Marge Tindal~ 1999

You watched me leave
through the panes of the window.

I looked back
through a window of pain.



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Marge,
Short and to the point. Well done.
WhtDove
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Few words much feeling! I like your work!
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Very good, Marge. Short and full of meaning!

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Marge Tindal
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Thanks, Seymour, WhiteDove and Denise.
Pain should be that short, but we all know it isn't.



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very nice play on words
I enjoyed this short little piece hugely!

X

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beautiful
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Short and sweet!

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oh my...so sad, so sad
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Marge, you know, this could have been written about me at one time.
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