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When The 'FriendShip' Sets Sail

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Marge Tindal
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When The 'FriendShip' Sets Sail
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

The nicest ships I've known
have sailed the many seas.
But the greatest ship is the 'FriendShip'.
Have you boarded one of these?

Come onboard, I invite you.
Bring your love and we'll set sail.
We travel the sea of tranquility.
With love we seldom fail.

The greatest part of the trip
is the mark we leave on your heart.
We want you to share the love
and carry it with you when you depart.

You will know that you are loved
and to your friends report ...
The 'FriendShip' carried me away
and we never left the port.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com
© Copyright 1999 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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Wonderful Marge, and to pay for passage you just have to give heart.
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Lovely Marge.....I really enjoyed this piece.......

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!
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Marge,
Excellent, the last line of the last stanza said it all.
Marge Tindal
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Thanks my new poetic friends.
Your opinions are valued by this writer.
And it's true ... we've never left port.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com
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Fantastic! and so much more. This was just great!
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Beautiful!

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Just wonderful Marge Me thinks I need a holiday upon that fabled ship!

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~Isis~
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Book passage, my friends. The 'FriendShip' sets sail everyday. Welcome on board !

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Loved the images this brought to mind!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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sweet!
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This is fantastic, Marge. I would love to ride that ship.
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