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Martie
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0 posted 1999-11-07 11:44 AM



In a song, suddenly
there is you
directing the dance.
Swiftly like a rising curtain
locked together swaying
is that fragile moment
still lit and languid
and poised forever in grace.

In the music of a laugh
the curve of your lip
breaths new and real
as a flash of color stirs
then flows across my bare shoulder
where I was cold
and now am warm.

© Copyright 1999 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 1999-11-07 11:48 AM


Pretty, Martie.

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2 posted 1999-11-07 01:09 PM


Martie,
You have a way with words, enjoyed the read.

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3 posted 1999-11-07 02:00 PM


Could envision this one! Well done!
Denise
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4 posted 1999-11-07 06:04 PM


Very lovely, indeed, Martie!

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Martie
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5 posted 1999-11-07 11:45 PM


Memories are for those who wait
or those who let them pass
with sixty seconds every one
until their days are done at last.

Each minute counts--Thanks

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6 posted 1999-11-07 11:48 PM


Smooth as silk, Martie..........as always.
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7 posted 1999-11-08 11:30 AM


Lovely...enjoyed this much!

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8 posted 1999-11-08 04:50 PM


Yes very lovely.........

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9 posted 1999-11-08 07:38 PM


I really liked this. Lovely !
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10 posted 2004-04-25 07:57 PM


as always, beautiful
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