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In a song, suddenly
there is you
directing the dance.
Swiftly like a rising curtain
locked together swaying
is that fragile moment
still lit and languid
and poised forever in grace.

In the music of a laugh
the curve of your lip
breaths new and real
as a flash of color stirs
then flows across my bare shoulder
where I was cold
and now am warm.
© Copyright 1999 Martie Odell-Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
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Pretty, Martie.

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Martie,
You have a way with words, enjoyed the read.
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Could envision this one! Well done!
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Very lovely, indeed, Martie!

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Memories are for those who wait
or those who let them pass
with sixty seconds every one
until their days are done at last.

Each minute counts--Thanks
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Smooth as silk, Martie..........as always.
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Lovely...enjoyed this much!

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Yes very lovely.........

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I really liked this. Lovely !
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as always, beautiful
 
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