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When ? ... Tell Me When

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Marge Tindal
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When? ...Tell Me When
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

When will I stop loving you?
When will this aching heart mend?
When will I stop remembering the love ...
I never thought would end?

When will thoughts of you abandon
every thought that I maintain?
When will I stop loving you ...
so I can try to love again?

When you left ...
you left your memories.
They haunt me night and day.
Why, oh why did you leave them?
For they just get in my way.

When will I stop remembering?
When will my heart be free of you?
When will you take your memories,
so I can find another
and get over loving you?

Locked in every crevice
of my heart and my mind ...
the memories of you waiting
to haunt me one more time.

When will I stop loving you?
Please release me from this pain.
When will I stop loving you ...
so I can gain control again.

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Martie
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This is heart breaking Marge. Memories do get in the way sometimes. Very well done!
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2 posted 11-07-1999 01:24 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Marge,
You write well and I enjoyed every read so far.
Marge Tindal
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Thanks Martie and Seymour.
I'm glad you are finding my poems to your liking.

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A heart that crys out. Your emotions come out well in your writing. I too have enjoyed reading your work. May you get beyond and love again!
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Very well done, Martie. A sad one

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Denise

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Heartbreaking....Well done.

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oh how your writing has changed!
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Marge, I use to ask myself these questions all the time. This could have been written about me. It sure fits.
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