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The pain that kills

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Patrick B
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0 posted 11-07-1999 11:26 AM       View Profile for Patrick B   Email Patrick B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Patrick B

As sunsets over distant hills,
I'm left with the pain that kills,
was loving you such a crime,
I'm your prisoner for all of time,
How can you be so far away,
I survive day,by painful day,
This is more hurt that a man can bare,
Dream of me,take me there,
Dry my tears and stroke my face,
Return me to that wonderous place,
I know the pain I feel is shared,
No ones heart is ever spared,
that icy cold of love unfulfilled,
my souls in mourning my heart is chilled,
I'll wonder forever beneath starlight,
the days are agony,it's worse at night,
I never imagined your love lost,
but oh my,what a cost.
© Copyright 1999 Patrick B - All Rights Reserved
devina
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1 posted 11-07-1999 12:35 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

how sad, i hope you find someone adoring of your love. good poem!
Denise
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2 posted 11-07-1999 06:13 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sad yet beautiful! I enjoyed reading this very much!

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Denise

Jennifer Marie O'Neil
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3 posted 11-07-1999 06:43 PM       View Profile for Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Email Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jennifer Marie O'Neil

AMAZING !!!!!
Isis
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4 posted 11-07-1999 06:59 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Such longing from the heart Patrick! You will find another much more deserving of your love..someday. Beautiful piece

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Patrick B
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5 posted 11-08-1999 06:57 AM       View Profile for Patrick B   Email Patrick B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Patrick B

thanks for the feedback all
Watcher666
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since 10-13-1999
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6 posted 11-08-1999 10:45 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Such longing expressed...liked this one.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
passing shadows
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7 posted 04-25-2004 08:25 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

a heart felt write

thank you
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