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My daughter Faun

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Seymour Tabin
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My daughter faun

Named my daughter after a fawn,
Looked as pretty when she was born.
Each time she stands within my sight,
The time rolls back in sheer delight

A conjured glean a passing dream,
A parents ever loving theme.
Forever a child to my eye,
Her childhood never said goodbye.

Although an adult now, quite grown
With lovely children of your own.
A mother and a known trustee
Yet to my eyes you still show three.

Sorry dear this gullible brew,
My mind does hold you in this view.
Though getting old I'm not senile.
You'll ever show this loving wile.

I ask you let the judgement wait
I'm sure in time, you will relate.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 11-07-1999 10:58 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Oh Seymour. You take my breath away. I understand so well this sentimant.
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Very heartwarming....loved this Sy!

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3 posted 11-07-1999 11:21 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Lovely thoughts, Seymour. Time marches on until the magic of our camera comands .. Halt ! Then time stands still as we flip through the Rolodex of memories.

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Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 11-07-1999 01:48 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Martie,
Thank you for the understanding.
Pepper,
Glad you warmed to this poem.
Marge,
Lots of memories to roll through, thanks for the read.
WhtDove
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Sey, another good'n! Funny how they seem to stay the same sweet age in our minds eye.
Very touching!
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This is very sweet, Seymour. I can so well relate to this one too!

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Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 11-07-1999 06:38 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

WhtDove,
That's true, thanks for the good'n.
Denice,
Your relating to this one was a nice compliment.
Isis
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So beautiful, they may be grown but in the heart they will always be our babies. A lifetime of beautiful memories to revisit and relive anytime, can't think of anything nicer!!

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~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Seymour Tabin
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Isis,
Yes they are and will, thank you for the read and comment.
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10 posted 11-07-1999 11:36 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

She is certainly worthy of a poem in her honor. Nice, Sy.
Mike
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Well done.
Sally S.
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Wow Sy! What a lovely tribute to your daughter! Very sweet.
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Simply lovely..timeless.Loved this.

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Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 11-08-1999 10:15 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Bal, Mike, sally and Watcher,
I left the sight to go to the loo.
Came back and found my poem on page two.
Thank you all for the boost back.
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Ah, children. Well done, sir.
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Sy, you were in the loo for 10 hours and 42 minutes? We gotta talk!
Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 11-08-1999 10:35 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sunshine,
Children, that says it all *L*
Balladeer,
You may have run out of things to write about, but your humor is as sharp as ever.
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I'm sure she is beautiful
 
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