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I'm A Child At Heart

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Lost Dreamer
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0 posted 11-07-1999 10:31 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lost Dreamer

I'm A Child At Heart

I've gazed a thousand moonlit skies
focusing my mind to be in tune with yours
drifting past millions of sparkling stars
envisioning your face smiling down at me.

I connect with reality of my being
I receive answers only I can understand
I place trust in a hand I cannot see
I can fall and know he will catch me.

I'm a child created carefully by him
given freedom to explore his universe
given freedom to express my beliefs
I'm a child at heart yearning to please.
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1 posted 11-07-1999 10:46 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

LD,
Nice thought well done.
Pepper
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Wonderful........

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The child in us trusts. I enjoyed reading this.
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Quite lovely, LD! I enjoyed the message in this!

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5 posted 11-07-1999 07:53 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Very nice ... for the child in all of us.

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6 posted 11-07-1999 09:52 PM       View Profile for X Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for X Angel

nice metaphor

X

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7 posted 11-07-1999 11:09 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

So Lovely!!

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Thanks to all for reading and enjoying. Passions is a place to be thankful for. Seldom does one find such a wonderful group of people.
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Absolutely beautiful

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