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Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 1999-11-07 10:31 AM


I'm A Child At Heart

I've gazed a thousand moonlit skies
focusing my mind to be in tune with yours
drifting past millions of sparkling stars
envisioning your face smiling down at me.

I connect with reality of my being
I receive answers only I can understand
I place trust in a hand I cannot see
I can fall and know he will catch me.

I'm a child created carefully by him
given freedom to explore his universe
given freedom to express my beliefs
I'm a child at heart yearning to please.

© Copyright 1999 RiaL - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 1999-11-07 10:46 AM


LD,
Nice thought well done.

Pepper
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2 posted 1999-11-07 10:55 AM


Wonderful........

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Martie
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3 posted 1999-11-07 11:04 AM


The child in us trusts. I enjoyed reading this.
Denise
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4 posted 1999-11-07 06:25 PM


Quite lovely, LD! I enjoyed the message in this!

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Denise


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5 posted 1999-11-07 07:53 PM


Very nice ... for the child in all of us.

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X Angel
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6 posted 1999-11-07 09:52 PM


nice metaphor

X

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"We have loved the stars too fondly to be fearful of the night" (Tombstone epitaph of two amateur astronomers)

Watcher666
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7 posted 1999-11-07 11:09 PM


So Lovely!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
8 posted 1999-11-09 10:55 AM


Thanks to all for reading and enjoying. Passions is a place to be thankful for. Seldom does one find such a wonderful group of people.
hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 1999-11-09 12:02 PM


Absolutely beautiful

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)

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