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Jennifer Marie O'Neil
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0 posted 11-07-1999 05:23 AM       View Profile for Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Email Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jennifer Marie O'Neil


More than my lover
my best friend
More than my friend
my lover
More than imaginable
my blessing
More than forever
my eternity
More than my heart
my soul
More than his kiss
his being
More than his words
his wisdom
More than promises
his loyalty
More than possessivness
his protection
More than my shame
his forgiveness
More than my life
he is my love
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1 posted 11-07-1999 05:52 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

This piece likes me much it does.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvilŠ

Watcher666
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2 posted 11-07-1999 06:45 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Well done!! Liked this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Munda
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3 posted 11-07-1999 08:05 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Lovely indeed ! : )
Pepper
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4 posted 11-07-1999 09:36 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Wonderful Jennifer.....loved the read

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!
WhtDove
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5 posted 11-07-1999 01:36 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Fantastic, as you've grabbed me with this! Great! I like how you did this. The format you put it in. So few words, but really touching deep. Says a lot!
Jennifer Marie O'Neil
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6 posted 11-07-1999 04:43 PM       View Profile for Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Email Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jennifer Marie O'Neil

thank you all for your wonderful words
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7 posted 11-07-1999 06:10 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Jennifer, this is just so beautiful! I love it!

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Denise

Jennifer Marie O'Neil
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8 posted 11-07-1999 06:34 PM       View Profile for Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Email Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jennifer Marie O'Neil

thank you Denise
such responses make posting so rewarding
X Angel
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9 posted 11-07-1999 09:02 PM       View Profile for X Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for X Angel

That's how true love should be.
I liked this, and look forward to more from you!
X

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"We have loved the stars too fondly to be fearful of the night" (Tombstone epitaph of two amateur astronomers)
Jennifer Marie O'Neil
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10 posted 11-07-1999 09:24 PM       View Profile for Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Email Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jennifer Marie O'Neil

I am fortunate enough to love somoene that much but a lot of pain can accompany it when it is impossible to be with the person.
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romantic write
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