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Perfect Ash

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LRAW
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0 posted 11-06-1999 11:45 PM       View Profile for LRAW   Email LRAW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LRAW

Perfect Ash

Perfect Ash, Shining so brightly
Defying what others think of you
When I caress you I feel so free
You are the common man's every need
I get excited when I think of you
Oh Perfect Ash, shine so bright

When my lips bring you in
It's like love fills my lungs
Other don't understand
That I need to be with you
Please oh, please don't burn out
Oh perfect Ash, shine so bright

I can't imagine a world without
your sweet smell that fills the air
You leave no doubt in my mind
That you are essential to mankind

But groups of people try to put you out
They don't know what you mean
But please don't worry, I will not
Let you too far out of my sight
Oh perfect Ash, shine so bright

And now were here face to face
You and me, the way it should be
I am in state of such bliss
I hope it always ends like this
Oh perfect ash, shine so bright
Oh perfect ash, please shine so bright
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Watcher666
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since 10-13-1999
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1 posted 11-06-1999 11:49 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Enjoyed the read!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
WhtDove
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2 posted 11-07-1999 01:19 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Interesting one! Welcome to Passions!
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