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I Know This Well, I've Been Here Before (Echo's challenge)

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WhtDove
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I know this well, I've been here before.
Walking with you along this shore
As the waves crashed upon the sand
I ran to you to catch your hand

The footprints that we left behind
Now washed away, can't be defined
Like memories not often thought
I'm left alone and feeling naught

I'm watching now the sun go down
With it, in my tears I drown
Wishing you were here with me
That once again we were carefree

I know this well, I've been here before
I remember when we walked the shore
Now your gone, I'm sitting alone
Listening to the ocean drone

© Copyright 1999 WhtDove - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 11-06-1999 10:40 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is simply wonderful, WhtDove! Beautiful!

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Denise

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2 posted 11-06-1999 10:43 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

This is beautiful....but the end has me ready to cry again...I just saw the Sixth Sense, and the end of your poem, like the end of the movie, is heartbreaking.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.


Watcher666
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3 posted 11-06-1999 11:14 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Sad,but so beautiful.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
WhtDove
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4 posted 11-06-1999 11:21 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Thanks so much Denise! Always appreciated!

S.D. I have seen that movie. The end was fantastic, how it all came together. I enjoyed that one too! Thanks for your wonderul comment!

Watcher thanks much!
Munda
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5 posted 11-07-1999 03:26 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Sigh...so sad...and beautiful. : )
Jennifer Marie O'Neil
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6 posted 11-07-1999 05:10 AM       View Profile for Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Email Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jennifer Marie O'Neil

This is a great poem. So sad but I love it. It is the first thing I read tonight and it fit my mood perfectly. What a beautiful poem !
Pepper
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7 posted 11-07-1999 08:08 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Beautiful WhtDove......

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 11-07-1999 09:24 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

WhtDove,
Just fly above the memory shore
And it will stay forever more.
Beautiful poem.
WhtDove
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Munda with much thanks to you!

JenifferM glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and replying! Though I hope the "mood" will pass soon for you!

Pepper thanks so much!

Thanks Seymour! The memory shore, good one Sey! Though it kind of fits me (this poem) but came out of that thing that we call our imagination. hehe
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10 posted 11-07-1999 02:09 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

White Dove ... very pretty indeed.
Senic and touching.
The footprints washed from the shore,
live in your heart forevermore.

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WhtDove
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11 posted 11-07-1999 03:31 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Thanks Marge! They certainly do stay in the heart don't they?!
Dark Angel
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12 posted 11-07-1999 04:49 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

WhtDove,This is absolutley beautiful girl!
Loved it

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Isis
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13 posted 11-07-1999 07:07 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Beautiful WhtDove, why do we torture ourselves though? Wish someone could answer that one for me? (HUGS)

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

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you and me both
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sigh
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