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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 1999-11-06 10:08 PM


Count and play

The memory winds of yesteryear
Flow for me still crystal clear.
The snow the rain the light of sun,
The pain the tears the bright of fun.

They touch me like a second life
And move me like a second wife.
Play upon my hopes and fears,
Today as much as yesteryear.

The memory winds of soundless sound
Are opiate wings backwards bound
Filling my lacy face with smiles,
When I am lost in dreamy wiles.

The memory winds grace silent time
With graceful endless soundless mime.
And morphemes me to full redeem,
Like a dream within a dream.

It is my treasure, I have put away
And now it's time to count and play.

© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 1999-11-06 10:33 PM


Enjoy, Seymour, enjoy! Very very nice!

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Denise


Systematic Decay
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2 posted 1999-11-06 10:50 PM


Seymour, I love this!!!! Beautifully worded!

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.



Watcher666
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3 posted 1999-11-06 11:18 PM


Enjoyed this much.Well done!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 1999-11-06 11:19 PM


Denise,
Can't thank you enough for your constant read and comments.
Systematic,
Thank you so much for the read and comment.
Watcher,
Thank you for the enjoy.

[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 11-06-1999).]

WhtDove
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5 posted 1999-11-06 11:26 PM


Like a dream within a dream...great one Seymour! Wonderful!
Munda
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6 posted 1999-11-07 03:18 AM


I love this ! : )
Pepper
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7 posted 1999-11-07 08:22 AM


Lovely Sy!

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 1999-11-07 09:44 AM


WhtDove,
Like a dream within a dream, thank you.
Munda,
Thank you for the love it.
Pepper,
And thank you for the lovely.

Martie
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9 posted 1999-11-07 11:07 AM


Most beautiful Seymour, as usual.
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 1999-11-07 12:59 PM


Martie,
Thank you again for the read and comment.

passing shadows
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11 posted 2004-04-25 08:42 PM


smiling at you
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