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Will You?

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Alwye
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In the space between moments


0 posted 11-06-1999 09:55 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alwye

Will you be my friend,
And allow me to be yours?
My hand will you let me lend,
So your weary soul may soar?

Will you let me see,
Deep inside your hidden heart?
Can you trust me to be,
The one you've wanted from the start?

Can you gaze into my eyes,
And see the emotion begin to blaze?
Can you gather from my sighs,
That it's you I need for all my days?

Will you take my trembling hand,
And hold me tight within your arms?
Will you save me from this land,
And keep my from my mind's own harm?

Will you softly touch my skin,
And my yearning lips so gently kiss?
Will you make me forget all that's been,
And rain my soul with moonlit bliss?

Oh please, will you be with me,
And tell me what I feel is true?
Will you whisper so tenderly,
The words "I love you"?

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*Krista Knutson*

"To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson

© Copyright 1999 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
Toerag
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1 posted 11-06-1999 09:57 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

I liked this one.....very sweet....
Systematic Decay
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2 posted 11-06-1999 10:52 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Alwye, this is just beautiful.....I really like it.

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3 posted 11-06-1999 10:54 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is sooooooo touchingly beautiful, Krista! (In love??)

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Denise

Alwye
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4 posted 11-06-1999 11:20 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Thanks!

dsnyder-- Well..um..yeah...::blushes::

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*Krista Knutson*

"To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson

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5 posted 11-06-1999 11:20 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Lovely!

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6 posted 11-07-1999 01:22 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Love ahhh! Hope it all works as you write. Truly sweet it is!
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7 posted 11-07-1999 03:54 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

: ) Love this Alwye.
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8 posted 11-07-1999 07:41 PM       View Profile for Dusk Treader   Email Dusk Treader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dusk Treader

I love it Krista, I come back to find this in my mailbox, what a wonderful surprise! Such a sweet little piece, I love it, my friend.

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9 posted 11-07-1999 08:55 PM       View Profile for X Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for X Angel

*sigh*
so, so sweet
X

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10 posted 11-07-1999 09:14 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Simply lovely Alwye...
Isn't new love grand!

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Love is indeed grand, Pepper..and gets grander as time goes by..thank you all for your comments.

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*Krista Knutson*

"To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson

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12 posted 11-08-1999 12:04 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Love IS grand and beautiful just like this poem!!

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
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Alwye
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Thanks..

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*Krista Knutson*

"To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson

 
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