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A Moment In Time

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Marge Tindal
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A Moment In Time
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

I forgot that I loved you
for one moment tonight.
Encircled by new arms
as he held me tight.

For just one moment
I thought to recall ,
that when your arms held me
I thought I had it all.

The pain that you left me
when you walked away
Was suddenly not there
when I heard him say....

"Forget that you loved him
for just this moment tonight.
Come into my heart
and I'll make it right."

As I looked in his eyes
I knew what I knew ...
That his arms now held me,
and I'd forget about you.

For just a moment
As he held me so close,
I remembered the night
when your memory became a ghost.

I forgot that I loved you
for one moment in time.
I'll embrace this moment
with this new love of mine.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 1999 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 11-06-1999 09:50 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Marge. Very touching!

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Denise

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Lovely....enjoyed this much!

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1st I'd like to welcome you if'n I didn't do that already! 2nd this was just fantastic!
Very well written and very touching! I really enjoyed this!
Marge Tindal
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Thanks to each of you. Nice to be here.
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Lovely Marge!
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Marge,
Well something is better then nothing.
Only joking, enjoyed the poem, well done.
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very powerful piece
SmartChick
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Marge, this is just beautiful! Sometimes, I wish there was someone to hold me, and make me forget the past. But, I am afraid of getting close to anyone. Not that I have met anyone.
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