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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 1999-11-06 03:07 PM


The Hardest Friend To Keep ...
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

She walked alone.
Yet, I called her friend.
She just didn't let
anyone come in.

She went her way
through the years.
I watched her as she cried.
She was a friend I wanted,
but she didn't let me inside.

I stuck to her
like crazy glue.
It seemed she just needed a friend.
What else could I do?

She tried to walk her way alone.
I could not let her go.
I told her just how much I cared.
How else could she possibly know?

She smiled and offered her hand,
said friend, you've always been here.
No matter what I've been through,
you always shed a tear.

You may think I've done it alone.
That's not exactly right.
Many times just knowing you cared,
carried me through the night.

I am so very grateful
for the love you've given me.
I've needed just the kind of friend
that you've tried to be.

I hope it isn't too late
to return the love to you,
that you have given so unselfishly
all my life through.

I treasure your friendship.
I hope you know it's true.
I'll try to be the kind of friend
you can count on too.

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noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 1999 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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1 posted 1999-11-06 04:01 PM


This is lovely.A true friend is a very hard person to find.

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Denise
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2 posted 1999-11-06 05:43 PM


Friends are priceless! Very nice, Marge.

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Denise


Lisann
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3 posted 2001-07-24 12:46 PM


Marge,  it is because of people like you that people like me survive.  I have always been the "hardest friend to keep"  you've described me perfectly in this piece.  And for me,  I now have a friend like you that has loved me through it all.  She has been my saviour, my angel Jane.  It is people like you and Jane that has taught us the true meaning of the word love so I am saying thank you for being that kind of person.  The world needs millions more of you.  Coming from a world of abuse and pain it is very comforting to know that there are people( unfortunately very few) in this world that really do love unconditionally.  I don't know you but I do thank you for being one of those people
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2001-07-24 01:10 PM


Lisann~
You know what, gal ?
We just keep on loving you ... until you love yourself.
That's what 'being there' really means to those of us who are the keepers of the hearts of others.

We hold you, until you can see the wonderful qualities that we see.

Reaching out and touching~
Thank you for finding something in this piece that touches you.
I'd say that your friend, Jane ... is an angel that knew you were worth keeping !

AND ... while I'm in here ...
This was posted on my first day of becoming a Passions poet ...
Thank you, Watcher (who no longer posts here)
and as ALWAYS ... our steady Denise ...
who I neglected to thank in my flurry of excitement and overposting on my first visit.

Almost two years later ...
It IS the greatest place to be to share with friends.

Lisann ... hello, friend !
Welcome to the heart of a keeper.
*hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                 noles1@totcon.com              

Dee
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5 posted 2001-08-15 11:51 PM


Marge, even way back here your love of friends shows up.  

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

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6 posted 2001-10-11 04:28 PM


I was thinking about "best friends" and found this gem, and it is a wonderful gem indeed.  

~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~

Sunshine
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7 posted 2002-01-05 06:12 PM



Looking back on your work, your growth in poetry is showing...

passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-01-01 04:30 AM


beautiful tribute!
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9 posted 2007-10-16 05:08 PM


You are a good friend to have, Marge. To this day, I remember the times you spent emailing me back and forth, when my marriage had gone bad. And, had become almost unbearable. You were there to help me see the things, I just didn't want to believe. I will always remember that. You had really touched my heart.
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