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Lost Dreamer
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0 posted 11-06-1999 03:03 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Frostbitten Mind

Sunlight's melt
upon frozen thoughts
penetrating flawlessly
attempting to thaw
this frostbitten mind.

Transferred deeply
hidden cavernously
out of existence
little puddles
manage their escape.

Frostbitten mind
remains frozen
no thaw in sight
icicles crackle
is all I imagine.
© Copyright 1999 RiaL - All Rights Reserved
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Nicely done.

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2 posted 11-06-1999 04:41 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very nice, Lost Dreamer! I enjoyed reading this!

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Thank-You both for reading, glad you enjoyed.
Pepper
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I enjoyed this piece much Lost Dreamer.....very well written.......

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Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 11-07-1999 01:31 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

LD,
The icicles will grow
This is what I know.
Enjoyed the read.
Martie
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The warmth in your heart
will thaw that mind
in time.
WhtDove
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Love your choice of words! Sunlight's melt upon frozen thoughts. Well done!
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