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No soul

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 11-06-1999 08:37 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

No soul

The leaps of man has stained the land,
Leaving their marks too deep.
They sweep the boundaries of demand,
In race with natures keep.

Their flowers are of welders bloom,
High very high they rise.
Making shadows and much gloom,
And squalor seems the prize.

There is no bail, no holy grail,
Where cloud and shadows lie.
It's a doubtful course that they sail,
The daffodils they die.

The shadows loom in conscious dream
A burning living flame.
It's all a part the conscious scheme
But negatives remain.

I can but say this lonely goal,
Just seems to have no soul.
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1 posted 11-06-1999 08:48 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Most excellent, Sey! As always, I enjoy your work immensely

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 11-06-1999 09:40 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Caroline,
Immense is wonderful thank you so much *L*
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Another Amen!

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Martie
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I admire your writing Seymour as always. Top notch!
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Liked this much!.Excellent!

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Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 11-06-1999 04:52 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Denise,
Thank you for the read and amen.
Martie,
Thank you for the top motch.
Watcher,
Thank you for the like.
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