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at first sight

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stuart
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0 posted 11-05-1999 11:14 PM       View Profile for stuart   Email stuart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stuart

FIRST SIGHT


The first time I saw you standing there,
Time had stopped, for a moment, a stare…
Your eyes so bright, so wonderful, so true
I melted at first sight of seeing you.

How can this be, a woman of beauty known of no other
She walks into my life as a breeze of summer.
Her smile brings joy to those around
With kindness and care that leaps abound.

How does this happen to one at all?
I wonder and ponder hoping time will stall.
What potion does she have, what spell, what pill?
A woman whose shear presence can bend my will.

Now that I have stepped forward to see it through,
I look forward to being alone with you.
In thoughts I have, in dreams at night
Ever since I’ve had that very first sight.
© Copyright 1999 stuart - All Rights Reserved
Systematic Decay
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1 posted 11-05-1999 11:18 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

This is so sweet...

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.


stuart
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2 posted 11-05-1999 11:35 PM       View Profile for stuart   Email stuart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stuart

I wrote this for a newly found "friend".. thanks for your comment.
Watcher666
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3 posted 11-06-1999 01:46 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Lovely....Well done!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Denise
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4 posted 11-06-1999 06:26 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sounds like love to me!

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Denise

stuart
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5 posted 11-06-1999 06:48 PM       View Profile for stuart   Email stuart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stuart

Denise,
She's quite remarkable!
I truly hope so.
Stuart
passing shadows
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6 posted 04-25-2004 09:07 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

very touching
 
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