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Blood and Lipstick

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Systematic Decay
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That place with padded walls a


0 posted 11-05-1999 10:57 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Systematic Decay

With a soul dripping in envious green
Eyes that smolder charcoal black, burning hate
Does she have a tender side no one's seen?
Are there sunny things to which she'll relate?

Her exterior is plastic and cheap
Her clothes are designed to gain a few friends
She is always dating many a creep
For attention, she lies and pretends

She'll slice up her wrists and shed a few tears
She suffers in a little rich girl's life
She's just like her mother, thrives on the fears
Of the victim in which she causes strife

Her selfish, self-pitying role does the trick
She's drowning in blood, buried in lipstick

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.


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Star Fairy 2
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cerritos, california, usa


1 posted 11-05-1999 11:04 PM       View Profile for Star Fairy 2   Email Star Fairy 2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Star Fairy 2

WOAHH... this is saturated in contempt... very powerful... you do a wonderful job at creating pictures!!

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Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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Alwye
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In the space between moments


2 posted 11-05-1999 11:07 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Wow, EXTREMELY powerful, SD...this packs an emotional punch, thats for sure. Exellent work.

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*Krista Knutson*

"To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson

Watcher666
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3 posted 11-06-1999 01:41 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Well done...know the type well!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
caroline
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4 posted 11-06-1999 09:08 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Wow...powerful pen you've got there SD
Well stated.

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

Systematic Decay
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That place with padded walls a


5 posted 11-06-1999 10:59 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Thanks Star Fairy, Alwye, Watcher, and caroline.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.


 
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