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Drift In Dreams

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Alwye
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In the space between moments


0 posted 11-05-1999 10:54 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alwye

This is as close as I could get to a dream I had last night....a quite lovely dream about a very special someone..


Silent music shimmers gold
A whisper of the trees
A kiss of sunset hues
The melody is the spirit
Of our cherished ones
The rolling of the waves
And their fragrant sprays
Memories long forgotten
Embedded within pearl sands
Now so gently flown
Upon silver laden wings
To my own utopian lands
Remembrance now so sweet
A softened trace of your touch
A glance into gentle eyes
Consumed with blazing love
Your whisper breaks the distance
Caressing my shivering skin
And somehow the horizon melts
Your warmth embraces me
I am now safe to drift in dreams
Within your loving arms.

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*Krista Knutson*

"To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson

© Copyright 1999 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
Systematic Decay
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1 posted 11-05-1999 10:57 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Ohhh......this is exquisite.....Beautiful.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.


WhtDove
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2 posted 11-05-1999 11:33 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

What a picture you painted! Well done in expression! Wanna send some of those dreams my way?
Alwye
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SD-- Thank you.

Whtdove-- I'd love to send such a dream your way..

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*Krista Knutson*

"To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson

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4 posted 11-06-1999 01:08 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

This is really beautiful Alwye,wow what a nice dream! well done

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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5 posted 11-06-1999 01:44 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Lovely!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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6 posted 11-06-1999 09:02 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

As always, Krista, your poetry shimmers in eloquence and beauty I like this much!

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

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7 posted 11-06-1999 10:35 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sounds like a wonderful dream!

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Denise

Martie
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8 posted 11-06-1999 12:30 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Beautiful dream and written remembrance.
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9 posted 11-06-1999 12:48 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Very nice images.

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Thank you all much!!

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*Krista Knutson*

"To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson

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11 posted 11-07-1999 02:12 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Beautiful dream Alwye. : )
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12 posted 11-07-1999 08:02 PM       View Profile for Dusk Treader   Email Dusk Treader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dusk Treader

Another little poem to grace my box, and send a little light of beauty this way. Thank you much, Krista, great piece!

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"All is gone except the will to be." - Metallica - "For Whom the Bell Tolls"
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I absolutely adored this the first time I read it! I just didn't have time to reply, but I am now!!!!
X

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"We have loved the stars too fondly to be fearful of the night" (Tombstone epitaph of two amateur astronomers)
Alwye
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Thank you both so much for your kindness.

Dusk-- I truly appreciate your kindness and friendship. You're one in a million, my friend.

X Angel-- Thank you so much. It means a lot.

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*Krista Knutson*

"To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson

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a beautiful dream indeed
 
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