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Showing signs of tears..

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For_Never
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0 posted 11-05-1999 10:29 PM       View Profile for For_Never   Email For_Never   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for For_Never

And yet he cried..

Pale in palor, dark in heart,
all he knew, even more he forgot
rifts in such a way,
that even he knew that this was the day..

And yet he cried.

Of all thingd, either to have..
or to have lost,
he shared nothing without,
nothing of within..

And yet he cried..

as once before..it was again..
what he lost... he refound..
so he wonders.. where had it been?
at this thought, he cried again..

and so he cried

It had left, he thought so sure..
when our binds were severed..
shrouded in faux passion..
his heart left with his love..

and he cried...

When she left, so had he,
like the victom..paralized, in some such way
unlike the physical, he so envied,
he had lost all but the baser of his self..

and he cried..

At least, he thought in revealing tones
at least there, in hat bed, their souls..
ah, their soul still are able..
to love, and feel the need..

and still he cried

From the wells that seemed unquinchable
tear flowed, and sprung, streaming down..
for the first time...perhaps ever,
but most likely not.. he felt...

and so...with fevor, and regret..
and sudden filling of a void,
he suddered,and dispelled that stagnent farce
and since he could, once again...he did..

and so...he cried...

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For a fateful night of passion, since my heart need one last vent, I believe I am willing to pay that black widows rent...
© Copyright 1999 Edward A. Beerman - All Rights Reserved
Systematic Decay
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1 posted 11-05-1999 10:54 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

I love this. So sad, but beautiful.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.


Watcher666
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since 10-13-1999
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2 posted 11-06-1999 01:38 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Hauntingly Beautiful!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Isis
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3 posted 11-07-1999 01:32 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Glad he could cry at least, it helps
So sad and beautiful Edward

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

 
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