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Religion's Irony

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 11-05-1999 09:18 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

God condemns man to living death,
divine madness stealing each breath.
Against fate does Heaven conspire,
denying each Hell-born desire.

Upon divine ashes man feeds,
seduced by his exigent needs.
In God one should never place trust,
for soon will life return to dust.

Creation shakes with profound mirth,
denying mankind's sense of worth.
Ambitions are placed out of reach,
as futile action God does teach.

Deity becomes puppeteer,
showing Heaven to be nadir.
Faith supports the morally weak,
against which no one dares to speak.

Heaven's madness steals divine breath,
denying man each Hell-born death.
God condemns each living desire,
so against fate does man conspire.


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Watcher666
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1 posted 11-05-1999 09:24 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Now as always I stand in awe of your talent brother of my soul.Excellent!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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2 posted 11-05-1999 10:04 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

That's exactly why we should trust Him, because we shall return to dust, whence we came!
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 11-05-1999 10:15 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Always enjoy reading your poetry.
DreamEvil
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4 posted 11-06-1999 06:59 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Just a touch of bitter to leaven the sweet.

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Munda
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5 posted 11-06-1999 07:08 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Even though I don't agree and see life a little different, it's a very good poem and I enjoyed reading it.
Munda
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6 posted 11-06-1999 07:10 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Even though I don't agree and see life a little different, it's a very good poem and I enjoyed reading it.
Jennifer Marie O'Neil
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7 posted 11-07-1999 05:07 PM       View Profile for Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Email Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jennifer Marie O'Neil

I really think this is a great poem. But I think it takes a strong person to have faith, faith brings hope and hope makes people stronger. Still what a great poem !
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