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Tell Me That You Love Me (a Pantoum)

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Lucie
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0 posted 11-05-1999 07:17 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lucie

Please tell me that you love me.
Tell me your intent is true.
Is it unconditionally?
The way that I love you?

Tell me your intent is true.
Will it be for always?
The way that I love you?
Or is it just for today?

Will it be for always?
Something to believe?
Or is it just for today?
If you give you will receive.

Something to believe?
Right there for me to touch.
If you give you will receive.
Because I love you so much.

Right there for me to touch.
Is it unconditionally?
Because I love you so much.
Please tell me that you love me.


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Not all poems I write are about me personally, yet they do come from MY soul.
© Copyright 1999 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
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1 posted 11-05-1999 09:06 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Exellent job with lovely sentiments!

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*Krista Knutson*

"To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson

Watcher666
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2 posted 11-05-1999 09:07 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Beautiful....Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Marilyn
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3 posted 11-05-1999 09:13 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

wonderful pantoum Lucie. Well done.
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