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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 11-05-1999 05:39 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Amen

It starts in the barn, bitchen,
On a cold September.
And his wife in the kitchen
Stirring up old ember.

The dog is curled by the door
The rooster crowen the day.
The cat scratchen the floor
Chickens pecken away.

The pigs are looking for food
Cows waiting for milken
The hens effectively brood
The eggs need collecten.

Children shouting loud in dress.
The food is getten cool.
Bow their heads in grace and bless
And off they run to school.

The day's hard, all chore no play
The sun is getten red.
Stops his work the end of day
And heads he straight for bed.

Winks and kisses his wife where then,
He slyly rolls his eyes, Amen.
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Martie
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Wonderful picture here Seymour! Loved the last line.
Denise
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Very nice picture indeed!

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Liked this one.Great imagary!

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Loved it Seymour!
Seymour Tabin
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Martie,Denise, Watcher and WhtDove thanks and Amen to you all but in another way
 
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