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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 1999-11-05 05:39 PM


Amen

It starts in the barn, bitchen,
On a cold September.
And his wife in the kitchen
Stirring up old ember.

The dog is curled by the door
The rooster crowen the day.
The cat scratchen the floor
Chickens pecken away.

The pigs are looking for food
Cows waiting for milken
The hens effectively brood
The eggs need collecten.

Children shouting loud in dress.
The food is getten cool.
Bow their heads in grace and bless
And off they run to school.

The day's hard, all chore no play
The sun is getten red.
Stops his work the end of day
And heads he straight for bed.

Winks and kisses his wife where then,
He slyly rolls his eyes, Amen.

© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 1999-11-05 05:46 PM


Wonderful picture here Seymour! Loved the last line.
Denise
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2 posted 1999-11-05 06:57 PM


Very nice picture indeed!

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Denise


Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
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3 posted 1999-11-05 09:00 PM


Liked this one.Great imagary!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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4 posted 1999-11-05 10:10 PM


Loved it Seymour!
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 1999-11-05 10:51 PM


Martie,Denise, Watcher and WhtDove thanks and Amen to you all but in another way
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