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I once shared a very beautiful smile....

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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 11-05-1999 05:05 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Here I am that selfish me
so deep in pain I forget to see
the needs of others
and what they feel...

It's true what they say
that to get past the pain
one looks to heal others
a rainbow instead of rain

But there's a reality here
that can't be ignored
the heart needs warmth
to be loved and much more

How many can say
they don't need a hug
now and again what we need
deep inside is love

If you're in no-mans land right now
feeling a little disillusioned
just need to feel someone cares
there's more than one conclusion

You can see yourself in my pain
think love only lasts a short while
or there again you can believe
I once shared a very beautiful smile....

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"Leaving someone when you love someone is the hardest thing to do, when you love someone as much as I love you"
© Copyright 1999 Cindy Jones - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 11-05-1999 07:09 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Rainbow this is simply beautiful! HUGS to you!

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Denise

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2 posted 11-05-1999 09:06 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Lovely..liked this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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3 posted 11-05-1999 09:18 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

There are many phrases I couldattach to you....."selfish" and forgeting to see the needs of others are not two of them. I've never known anyone more caring and giving than you, Rainbow.
WhtDove
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4 posted 11-05-1999 09:55 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

RG, I agree with Balladeer on this one! Selfish? I don't think so. When we hurt we look at us yes. But that is so normal. I wouldn't call yourself selfish! Beautiful BTW!
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 11-05-1999 10:02 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

RG,
I can only agree with Balladeer on this one.
Enjoyed the read.
JTF
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6 posted 11-06-1999 12:05 PM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

I don't think you're selfish either, and you do have a very beautiful smile.

HUSG
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7 posted 11-06-1999 02:35 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Oh, geesh... yamean I have to agree with Balladeer AGAIN??? Yup... sure do! *G*

Great poem from a great lady!
stuart
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8 posted 11-06-1999 03:05 PM       View Profile for stuart   Email stuart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stuart

Great one! Pain subsides with time and love for great soles, like yours, will rise above.
Thanks for the read.
Stuart
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9 posted 11-06-1999 03:12 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Nice, Rainbow. And extra nice when the sun returns to dry out the rain ... hence, the rainbow is seen.

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*big grins* I get a double ditto on this one, and it is priceless, suthern agreeing with Balladeer.....and even more so cause the sentiment is perfect, you are the definition of "caring"......big hugs lady
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11 posted 11-08-1999 02:28 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

She is selfish! Never once has she offered to share her body with me....NOT ONCE! Sure, she's given hugs, fabulous eyes, well wishes etc., but never once her body?....I swear, some people are just plain greedy and horde their "finer things" for themselves!

Balladeer, I know you've got an I.Q. at least in the high 80's....(okay, maybe a little higher than that), and you've noticed what a fine gal this lady truly is, so I've noticed from your replies), but you really have no idea whatta fine lady this person is. I guess I've known her for quite some time now, and have never heard any comment from her that wasn't caring or giving. Gotta love her don't ya?....
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I believe you"once shared a very beautiful smile."
And I have to agree with the others...you are a most caring and giving soul......


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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

Jennifer Marie O'Neil
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13 posted 11-08-1999 03:23 PM       View Profile for Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Email Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jennifer Marie O'Neil

beautiful rainbow

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Faith is to believe what we do not see, and the reward of faith is to see what we believe. AUGUSTINE
RainbowGirl
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14 posted 11-08-1999 03:40 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Ok folks....you know when you're really sad and somehow it all comes out in what you write, well it does with me and I write all these sad poems and poof for a day and I'm sat here, prior to this poem, thinking how do I respond without sounding even more gloomy and that blasted Toerag got me again...ROFLMAO!!!!

Thank you all for your replies. ..It really is good to smile and laugh...

HUSG all from a laughing Rainbow..

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 11-08-1999).]
Martie
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Don't forget those clouds have silver linings. Hugs to you for a beautiful poem, even if it was sad.
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how beautiful!
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