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I once shared a very beautiful smile....
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I once shared a very beautiful smile.... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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Here I am that selfish me so deep in pain I forget to see the needs of others and what they feel... It's true what they say that to get past the pain one looks to heal others a rainbow instead of rain But there's a reality here that can't be ignored the heart needs warmth to be loved and much more How many can say they don't need a hug now and again what we need deep inside is love If you're in no-mans land right now feeling a little disillusioned just need to feel someone cares there's more than one conclusion You can see yourself in my pain think love only lasts a short while or there again you can believe I once shared a very beautiful smile.... ------------------ "Leaving someone when you love someone is the hardest thing to do, when you love someone as much as I love you" |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Rainbow this is simply beautiful! HUGS to you!  ------------------ Denise |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Lovely..liked this much! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
There are many phrases I couldattach to you....."selfish" and forgeting to see the needs of others are not two of them. I've never known anyone more caring and giving than you, Rainbow. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
RG, I agree with Balladeer on this one! Selfish? I don't think so. When we hurt we look at us yes. But that is so normal. I wouldn't call yourself selfish! Beautiful BTW! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RG, I can only agree with Balladeer on this one. Enjoyed the read. |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
I don't think you're selfish either, and you do have a very beautiful smile. HUSG |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, geesh... yamean I have to agree with Balladeer AGAIN??? Yup... sure do! *G* Great poem from a great lady! |
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stuart Junior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 14Cincinnati, OH |
Great one! Pain subsides with time and love for great soles, like yours, will rise above. Thanks for the read. Stuart |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nice, Rainbow. And extra nice when the sun returns to dry out the rain ... hence, the rainbow is seen. ------------------ noles1@totcon.com |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
*big grins* I get a double ditto on this one, and it is priceless, suthern agreeing with Balladeer.....and even more so cause the sentiment is perfect, you are the definition of "caring"......big hugs lady |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
She is selfish! Never once has she offered to share her body with me....NOT ONCE! Sure, she's given hugs, fabulous eyes, well wishes etc., but never once her body?....I swear, some people are just plain greedy and horde their "finer things" for themselves! Balladeer, I know you've got an I.Q. at least in the high 80's....(okay, maybe a little higher than that), and you've noticed what a fine gal this lady truly is, so I've noticed from your replies), but you really have no idea whatta fine lady this person is. I guess I've known her for quite some time now, and have never heard any comment from her that wasn't caring or giving. Gotta love her don't ya?.... |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I believe you"once shared a very beautiful smile." And I have to agree with the others...you are a most caring and giving soul...... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Jennifer Marie O'Neil Junior Member
since 1999-11-01
Posts 48port charlotte fl/bklyn ny |
beautiful rainbow ------------------ Faith is to believe what we do not see, and the reward of faith is to see what we believe. AUGUSTINE |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Ok folks....you know when you're really sad and somehow it all comes out in what you write, well it does with me and I write all these sad poems and poof for a day and I'm sat here, prior to this poem, thinking how do I respond without sounding even more gloomy and that blasted Toerag got me again...ROFLMAO!!!! Thank you all for your replies. ..It really is good to smile and laugh...HUSG all from a laughing Rainbow.. ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 11-08-1999).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Don't forget those clouds have silver linings. Hugs to you for a beautiful poem, even if it was sad. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how beautiful! |
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