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Blondie
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since 1999-08-06
Posts 307
Ohio

0 posted 1999-11-05 05:00 PM


*different form of a poem

Your back hurts
Your neck aches
You have no shirts
Your ankle breaks

Your hair is bad
Your nail just broke
Your hubby's sad
Your kid did choke

Dryer won't work
Vaccuum died
Neighbor's a jerk
Friend just lied

Shoes too small
Shirt too tight
Kid lost ball
It's out of sight

Bedrooms are a mess
Clothes on floor
You'll die of stress
Or just head for door

Eyelash in eye
Out of hair spray
Oh me! Oh my!
What a bad day!

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Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-11-05 08:56 PM


Sounds like a day in my house! Well done!

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Blondie
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since 1999-08-06
Posts 307
Ohio
2 posted 1999-11-05 10:10 PM


Thanks so much
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