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Will you hold me close ...

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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 11-05-1999 03:38 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Can you spare the time to talk
I'd like to listen for a while
Hold my hand while we walk
Share with me one last smile
Will you hold me close
Until the pain subsides

Can you spare me a minute or two
So we can talk and laugh
Can we enjoy the view
As we look around the park
Will you hold me close
Until the pain subsides

Will you share you with me
Our smiles are so rare these days
Raise your eyes to mine and see
them fuse with fire as they blaze
Will you hold me close
Until the pain subsides

Will you hold me really tight
Let me cry till the tears run dry
Then hug me till the laughter returns
Tell me there was nothing more to try
Will you hold me close
Until this pain has died?


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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 11-05-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Cindy Jones - All Rights Reserved
Cinderella
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1 posted 11-05-1999 03:47 PM       View Profile for Cinderella   Email Cinderella   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cinderella

This was wonderful and touched me deeply...
Dark Angel
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2 posted 11-05-1999 04:01 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

RainbowGirl, this is truly beautiful Hon
((((HUGS))))

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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3 posted 11-05-1999 04:07 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Beautiful and sad... I hope the answer is yes.
Pepper
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4 posted 11-05-1999 05:12 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

this is very moving RG.... beautifully written.....

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!
Isis
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5 posted 11-05-1999 06:11 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

I hope he does RG. ((HUGS))

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
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Watcher666
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6 posted 11-05-1999 08:58 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Well done.Liked this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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7 posted 11-05-1999 09:02 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

RG this was very touching. I too hope the answer is yes!
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8 posted 11-05-1999 09:42 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Y E S !!! Y E S !!! Y E S !!!
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 11-05-1999 10:29 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

RG,
Sending you a hug and press, I can do no less.
JTF
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10 posted 11-06-1999 11:48 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

I ditto Balladeer's answer ...

HUSG


[This message has been edited by JTF (edited 11-06-1999).]
Denise
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11 posted 11-06-1999 06:08 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very lovely piece, Rainbow! HUGS to you!

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Denise

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12 posted 11-06-1999 06:17 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

I think, Rainbow Girl, that you will have very little trouble finding someone to hold you, whatever the reason.

I liked this poem. Thank you for sharing it.

--Kess

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You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.

stuart
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13 posted 11-06-1999 06:34 PM       View Profile for stuart   Email stuart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stuart

Truely a moving piece of work RG.
Enjoyed it very much. Hearts like this can never be lonely for long.
HUGS to you Rainbow!

Stuart
Julie
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14 posted 11-06-1999 06:47 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Lovely RainbowGirl...Hugs for you..

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Julie
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Munda
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15 posted 11-06-1999 07:03 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

HUGS !
Toerag
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16 posted 11-06-1999 07:08 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Yes dear..I will...you on one shoulder, Suthern on the other....nicely done Brit
Martie
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17 posted 11-06-1999 07:15 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Can you stand one more hug. This was very touching, tender and sad.
Alwye
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18 posted 11-06-1999 09:05 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

And one more hug from me too?? This is incredibly moving...so beautiful.

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*Krista Knutson*

"To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson

Iloveit
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19 posted 11-08-1999 11:21 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

wow rainbow, this is truly truly beautiful
RainbowGirl
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20 posted 11-08-1999 04:56 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Thank you for all the HUGS.. and yes, there is always room for more HUGS..

Bless you all for the responses..

HUGS all

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.
Poet deVine
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21 posted 11-08-1999 05:02 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

This is like a song..the imagery so vivid, the request so hauntingly sad, it's hard to say what I really feel.
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22 posted 06-06-2004 02:41 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

precious
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