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Warm snow was melting (a very old poem)

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Master
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0 posted 11-05-1999 01:14 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

That night there was a full eclipse
Warm snow was melting on her lips
A scent of spring was in the air
He said, “let’s go,” she asked him, “where?”
They slowly wandered with no purpose
Warm snow was melting on the surface
He tightly held her shaking hand
He said, “let’s kiss,” she asked him, “when?”
Their lips have touched and frozen still
Warm snow was melting on a hill
Heart to a heart, eye to an eye
He begged, “again!” she asked him, “why?”
There was no purpose in it all
Warm snow has melted in his soul
In her, the snow turned into ice
And she was melting in his eyes
© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 11-05-1999 08:51 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Beautiful!

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2 posted 11-05-1999 08:59 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Whoa, liked this one much! Love the end there!
Master
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3 posted 11-05-1999 11:28 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thank you both!
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4 posted 11-06-1999 09:41 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Nice imagery here Master...it paints your words well

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Martie
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5 posted 11-06-1999 12:22 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

I read this several times. REally liked the mood you created. Well done!
Master
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6 posted 11-06-1999 03:38 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thanks Caroline and Martie! Glad you liked it!
Munda
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Master, this is beautiful ! : )
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Very nice, Master, enjoyed this very much!

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Denise

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9 posted 11-06-1999 05:14 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

I think I was there on that
snow-capped hill.
Breathlessly awaiting the melt ...

Beautiful, just beautiful.

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