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suthern
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0 posted 11-05-1999 12:49 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for suthern

A real heart beats within this breast
Real legs get weary and need rest
Real feelings suffer angst and pain
When your rapier wit lets loose again.
It really matters what you do
Though all you care about is you
You give no damn of how I feel
But both I and my love are real!
You may not think I see or care
Guess lust replaced your brain up there?
The tears that redden these blue eyes
Come from a soul that really dies.
Just laugh as though I am not here
You really are a bitch, my dear!
© Copyright 1999 suthern - All Rights Reserved
Justin Thyme
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1 posted 11-05-1999 01:13 PM       View Profile for Justin Thyme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Justin Thyme

Whoa! Hey, now! What's the problem here?
Of course, you're here, my friend.
I don't know why you feel like this,
but hope this soon will end!

You sure sound like you're serious,
I truly hope you're not!
Why are you calling people names?
Those names can hurt a lot!

I'm sure whoever hurt you
didn't mean to do it!!!!!!!!
Sometimes words can be read wrong,
I guess this person blew it.



here's hoping your poem was just fiction and all is well with you
RainbowGirl
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2 posted 11-05-1999 01:22 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Suthern: Me thinks we should switch mirrors..:-)

HUSG my friend

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Marilyn
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3 posted 11-05-1999 02:00 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

suthern my friend...I know that you exist and you are a special woman. I am sorry that this person made you feel this way.
Toerag
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4 posted 11-05-1999 02:56 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

I din't do nuthin? It must be that Balladeer or that other bitch LongJohn?....I do know that after Balladeer posted that poem about huntin a romance on the internet, and then, never did get a response from Pee Wee Herman, (his true love), that some things went kinda crazy around here...but honestly, I've behaved...(some).....LOL....nice poem though bitch!
WhtDove
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5 posted 11-05-1999 03:01 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Whoa Suthern! What's up? You care to expound on this a bit? Someone calling you that or you calling someone else that? Either way it sounds like you could use one BUG HUG!!!
suthern
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6 posted 11-05-1999 03:09 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

A BUG hug, WhtDove???? Call Balladeer! LOL

And Toe... I wouldn't want you one bit different from what you are, dear friend... 'cept for that patience thang, you're dern near perfect! LOL. (Well... you did forget the "silly." *G*)... and ROFL @ Pee Wee! *G*

Rainbow: I'd rather switch wardrobes... and be able to fit in yours! *G* (Can I have your car, too? *G*... you can keep the worm. *EG*)

Marilyn: Thank you!

Justin & WhtDove: You're right... this isn't the norm for me... guess I needed the vent... thanks bunches!

[This message has been edited by suthern (edited 11-05-1999).]
WhtDove
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7 posted 11-05-1999 03:21 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

ROFLMAO...Suthern I'm sorry, I didn't catch that. I didn't do that on purpose. When I saw that I cracked up really hard. I'm sorry Hon! You can vent anytime you know that. I'm sorry you're feeling like this. Call Balladeer, oh no, better find a place to hide real quick. On the serious side, if you'd like to, give me an email...I'd like to know what you're talking about.
Dark Angel
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8 posted 11-05-1999 03:57 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

WOW Suthern, this poem really gets the message across. So sorry you feel like this, hopefully soon, it will fade away (((hugs)))

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


RainbowGirl
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9 posted 11-05-1999 04:03 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Suthern: You can help yourself to my wardrobe any time.. As for the car: it's yours but you'll have to pay the import duty, how about we share?..

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Pepper
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10 posted 11-05-1999 05:30 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

sending HUGS Suthern.....

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!
Isis
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11 posted 11-05-1999 06:07 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

(HUGS) from me too, how awful for her to make you feel this way. Hope the venting helped

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Denise
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12 posted 11-05-1999 07:31 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Ahhhh, Suthern, I hope everything's OK. This feels so sad.

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Denise

Watcher666
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13 posted 11-05-1999 09:12 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

So sad And angry!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Balladeer
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14 posted 11-05-1999 09:39 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I hope you're happy, Toerag! This wonderful woman has idolized you and for you to do this...this...whatever you did...to her is more than I can understand. Or was it LongJohn?
I hope you're happy, Longjohn! this woman had idolized you and............


Suthern, I've got a thicknecked friend named Bruno who would love to speak to whoever caused you to write this....
Dr.Moose1
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15 posted 11-05-1999 09:42 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

OUCH ! your words make my ears hurt
Been there, done that, be alert
There are those who you should shun
'Till you find your rightful one

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Sometimes nonsense isn't .
JTF
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16 posted 11-06-1999 11:55 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

Another great one Auntie !

SMOOCHES
suthern
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17 posted 11-06-1999 02:47 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Balladeer: I'll admit I've called that sweet Toerag many things (wonderful, incredible, magnificent, fine, kind-hearted, gorgeous, witty, funny, intelligent, lovable... to name just a few *G*) but I've never once been even a little bit tempted to call him a bitch! LOL. (Neither have I been guilty of idolizing Long John... but thanks for the grins! LOL)

Thank you all very much for your kind comments and concern... both are appreciated.
Iloveit
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18 posted 11-08-1999 11:39 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

suthern, really great poem, can you teach me to vent like this *g* maybe some down and out anger would do me good *g*

ROFG@bug hug, call balladeer, idolizing LJ, thicknecked friend named Bruno....
somehow that doesn't equal out, suthern gets hurt and needs to vent, we get to read her great poem, and then rofg@the responses.....but at least everyone feels better....right?
hope so big hugs lady, you are special to me

[This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 11-08-1999).]
Jennifer Marie O'Neil
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19 posted 11-08-1999 03:20 PM       View Profile for Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Email Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jennifer Marie O'Neil

so much feeling and such a great poem

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Faith is to believe what we do not see, and the reward of faith is to see what we believe. AUGUSTINE
Pepper
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20 posted 11-08-1999 03:56 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

sending more Hugs.....

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!



[This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 11-08-1999).]
Lilli
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21 posted 11-08-1999 04:25 PM       View Profile for Lilli   Email Lilli   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lilli

Captured the way I feel perfectly, 'cept I think this about a selfish lil' boy! not a bitchy lil' girl

*growls*
 
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